I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thank you for sharing the work that you have done in writing this week! I am sure that Todd will love this song, you have said some really nice things. Are you going to sing it to Todd?
I look forward to reading your next blog post. Miss Lauder ☺️
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language. 3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question. Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the work that you have done in writing this week!
I am sure that Todd will love this song, you have said some really nice things.
Are you going to sing it to Todd?
I look forward to reading your next blog post.
Miss Lauder ☺️
yes i did
Deletewell done olivia i like the way you made the song interesting about tod!
ReplyDeletewell done again!
todd not tod
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